For the past few weeks we have been learning about how to write a narrative story. I hope you enjoy my story.
The Seven little Pigs and the Popular Hunter
There was once a million years ago Seven Little Pigs. There names were Matariki, Waiti, Waita, Waipunarangi, Ururangi, Tupuanuku and Tupuarangi.
They were scavenging for food in the forest. When they were scavenging for food they got captured in a gigantic and strong net.
“Hooray!” the hunter said, “I have got Seven Little Pigs for dinner”.
The Seven Little Pigs were so scared they began to cry. Tawhirimatea the god of wind saw the Seven Little Pigs crying in the gigantic and strong net. He had a terrific and awesome plan. Tawhirimatea blew and blew and he blew the Seven Little Pigs up to the white blue sky.The Seven Little Pigs stayed up in the sky, and so when we look up to the sky now, the Seven Little Pigs are the seven stars of Matariki.
By Christian Fa’avae.
I really like your story Chris! I'm glad that Tawhirimatea saved the seven little pigs from the hunter. Maybe you could add a little bit more to the story to say why he decided to save them: were they special pigs, or was Tawhirimatea just in a good mood that day? :)
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